Creative Paragraphs- Man in Space

This week we have been learning to rework our writing to make our paragraphs interesting for our audience. We started by writing a creative sentence about this picture. As a class we will choose Nate's sentence because we liked it the best and wrote a paragraph each to follow the chosen sentence. Here is the beginning of my story that starts with Nate's sentence.

A spaceman bravely walks out into the icy milkyway. “Your mission is to find the hidden bomb before it explodes destroying the village!” says a voice through the ear mic. The spaceman moves towards the milky way’s portal which will take him to the village.

He takes a step into the portal. It feels strange as he spins slowly at first and then quicker and quicker. 6mins later he arrives at the village.

There were strange looking people and strange looking pets. Then he said in a loud voice “has anybody seen a bomb?” The leader stomped towards him and says “yes.” “It’s in a castle that's surrounded by guards that have dangerous weapons like guns, swords, grenades and other bad stuff. This will be a tough mission. We will help you!” the people said.

The spaceman thinks of a plan. He asks them “Do you have any weapons?”  “Yes” the people replied “we have ”. Then he said what kind of weapons. Sticks they all said. Sticks? The man was confused.

But suddenly he had an idea. He said "Do you have any string?" They said "yes." The man said "we could make arrows. But what does the castle look like?" "Its spooky and it hasn't even been cleaned since the 1980s." 


Look forward to Chapter 2 later. I hope you can read the next part, bye. :)