Showing posts with label writing. Show all posts
Showing posts with label writing. Show all posts

Thursday, 3 March 2016

Jack Jack Attack


1 day ago there was a baby named jack jack he was a bad boy then karry came to babysit
him then she did not no what was going on with jack jack then she showed him some cards of a triangle a house then a fire. Then jack jack turned into a fire baby and karry grab a metal stick
to grab him then she got him and put him in the bath tub. ok bye hope you liked it.

Wednesday, 24 February 2016

volcanoes


Once upon a time there was two volcanoes  
named Ching and Lee who lived next to each other. On 4th July in china
they were talking about what they wanted to be Lee wanted to be A
plane and Ching wanted to be a person.
Then they Had a 20 min nap Then Lee woke Up with A loud yawn Waiting
for Ching to get up. Then Ching woke up with a small yawn Then Lee said
A big GOOD MORNING!!!.
Then Ching said good Morning lee Then ching said did you have a dream? Then Lee answered back yes. I had a dream that I was a plane. Then Ching said where did you go? I went to Chicago
And there were a lot of people there they had a festival then when it finished I went to new Zealand what was it like there said ching? It
was beautiful so many people lovely people then I woke up. WoW that
was a beautiful dream you had there said ching.

What about you ching what was your dream about? My dream was
that I was a person they called me Lily. Lily that's a wonderful
name said lee. well thank you said ching back to the story.
My name was
Lily I lived In new york I liked It there I even had a family
which was wonderful I was the youngest girl in the family
the first thing we did was shopping We brought some lollies
They were delicious. Then we went to the movies to watch the
kung fu panda Then that was it. Then i woke up and yea that
was it.


That was wonderful said lee. WoW hey want to tell jokes said lee
yes said ching you go first. What did the big volcano say to the little volcano you're too young to be smoking. hahahahahahaha ching laughed
but she did not stop laughing then lee said stop laughing ching said
lee I can't stop laughing hahahahahahahahahaha then she was shaking
until. she erupted and rocks were shooting out on to the island and the people were screaming some of islanders died some survived then
she stop then the people were crying and ching felt bad very bad
lee was so sorry they didn't talk to each other for weeks then

talked for little and then they said sorry to each other thank you for reading I hope you like it bye.

Monday, 10 August 2015

If i had a million dollars to spend- Plan


This is what i would buy with 1million dollars at siylvia park
What would you buy with amillion dollars.

Thursday, 6 August 2015

CV


The purpose of a CV is to show and explain to your employer (boss) the skills you have for the job and why you are the best person that is applying.
Remember there are lots of other people that want the job

Explain why you are the best person for this job: I come to school every day.
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What 3 skills do you have that best suit the job?
Come to school everyday.
Charge my net books.
Put it away when the second bell rings.


The reason why you should pick me because
For the penn news is because Im good with chrome books. And IM also good at getting it started. Good at charging it and thats why you should pick me thank you for reading byee. (:


Monday, 3 August 2015

Holiday recount




On The holidays We went to laser strike and it was amazing. my cousins ephraim and terry came. and my aunty and uncle.

first we went to the man and he was getting it ready. and then we played  this BasketBall game while we were waiting and when we finished that we only got 2 tickets.

I wanted heaps of tickets because you can by some amazing looking toys. then we played This chocolate game you had to control it.
and I got nothing but my cousin ephraim got four and then we ate it.

And It Was Delicious. Then we went and looked at laser web and It looked awesome.
Then ephraim found laser strike and it looked cool. Then we ran back down and the man was ready. And then he took us up stairs. Then he took us In this secret room and it was cool.

Then we watched a video And it told us about the rules we weren't aloud to run we weren't aloud to lie down or sit down  I would tell you more rules but It takes for ages.

Then finally we played. When we went in we saw the blue team they almost got me. then I got the yellow team. And there weapon was deactivated.
Then this tall guy in the red team got me and someone was following me.

Then I shot him. Then there Was this little thing up the sealing and i shot it for
200,0 points. And I was camping then this little girl shot me.
And my weapon was deactivated.
Then After 1 hour Our weapon told us that it was finished.
Then we went back up and put our flack jackets away and Then she took Us back down the stairs and showed us the points and we came last.
but it Was fun then We went back Real home and had a Good day.

Thank you for reading bye.

Tuesday, 16 June 2015

Where's Job?



In Room 10 we have been writing sentences that describe where we are in the school. Here is my presentation. Can you guess where I am?

Thursday, 11 June 2015

animal







PLANNING TABLE:
Colour
Size
Features
black
vanilla
white
humongous
huge
gigantic
enormous
high
tall
big
angry face
hair poking out
interested
hungry
thirsty


Start Writing Here: HI and welcome to my animal presentation I am describing an animal can you guess what it is?. right its an gorilla .


This gorilla is angry and has his hair is poking out. He must be thirsty and hungry.   What a humongous, gigantic and big creature he is. I think his colour is black and vanilla like the vanilla gorilla. That rhymes!



today we learned about animals and this is my animal and it is an gorilla.
it took me like 10mins to get this done. it wasen't that long it was short.
But I hope you like my picture its a gorilla.
it wasen't the best I could do.
thank u for reading byee.